styd,
Write colder and more scientifically, it will be more palatable for your professors and easier to read; trust me. Do NOT use shorthand or slang common among string people, you'll only lose points.
Also, eight string basses (the kind that have four paired strings, called cords) are not considered to be extended range basses.
What do you base this statement upon, and from where do you derive your terminology? Please support. Consider the reader totally uneducated, albeit with a smidge of common sense. Don't be shy, my wife just returned to college and I judge her writing just as harshly.
And for the luvva Mike, why give Warwick props? Your paper is not a commercial. The first noticable thing they did was make an electric upright, and they didn't even invent the concept. Information comes at an all-time low price right now; don't assume your prof won't invest in challenging your thesis.
And by the way, bsee, did any of us buy GC's fan-head five or has it disappeared into the ether Zebrawood peghead and all? I was born that year, and had just made up my mind to but it, for safe-keeping of course. Fess up, y'all.